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Phil Waters
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Well, that's me completed four of my six tutor marked assignments and I have decided that this is very difficult.
I am confident of passing but I never really study at all. That's why I think I will fail the actual exam in October (when I say I will pass I mean the TMA's).
This is what my tutor wrote about my latest essay -
Parts of this essay are reasonably good (your discussion of the recklessness cases particularly) but when you tried to generalise, as at the end, and make your own argument it began to deteriorate (see my marginal comments and compare my attached "rough notes"). Part of the problem was in starting with strict liability and returning to it at the end, when it would have been better to lay out mens rea issues first. It would also have been useful to lay out the various sub-topics in a logical way; this might have helped you get in everything you left out (eg Road Traffic Act defences, Sweet v Parsley on strict liability and the presumption of mens rea). So still plenty of room for improvement.
I liked the part where he wrote "parts of this essay are reasonably good..." but after that his summary deteriorated. :lol:
I am confident of passing but I never really study at all. That's why I think I will fail the actual exam in October (when I say I will pass I mean the TMA's).
This is what my tutor wrote about my latest essay -
Parts of this essay are reasonably good (your discussion of the recklessness cases particularly) but when you tried to generalise, as at the end, and make your own argument it began to deteriorate (see my marginal comments and compare my attached "rough notes"). Part of the problem was in starting with strict liability and returning to it at the end, when it would have been better to lay out mens rea issues first. It would also have been useful to lay out the various sub-topics in a logical way; this might have helped you get in everything you left out (eg Road Traffic Act defences, Sweet v Parsley on strict liability and the presumption of mens rea). So still plenty of room for improvement.
I liked the part where he wrote "parts of this essay are reasonably good..." but after that his summary deteriorated. :lol: